Monday, 8 August 2016

Death of a rat

Death of a rat


I crossed the half dead rat.
I caught the moment, his struggle
in the great noise of life.
I took the U turn on the road
and came to rescue the rat
as if it was in my command.


He was centured on the road -
not by his will.
It was not a suicide attempt,
they are brave indeed.

I saw the moments of his struggling
to enter a better life in all ways possible.
The wheels of the giant cars
buzzed over it, mercilessly.

The tiny velvety ears flapping by the wind
and then
lost forever to hear the music of the space.

Minu Jasdanwala 

18 comments:

  1. Hello sir, i read the poem and it was amazing. It's stunning. The way u have described the emotion of a rat and the the way you expressed the situation of a rat.....it was too emotional and heart touching.

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  2. Hello sir it's very short and sweet poem.The way you have described the situation of the rat it is very heart touching and the situation in which the rat is and the emotions of that rat to live teaches us that we should never loose hope....

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  3. Hello sir, I read this poem and it is very nice poem. In this poem i like this line "struggling to enter a better life allways possible". This poem is teaches us that struggle is important role played in our life. So it is an emotional poem.

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  4. Hello! Minusir. It is very emotional poem about struggle of tinny 🐀. You describe it in such simple way. It convey sympathetic massage for each and every living be.

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  5. Hello sir, poem is very short but it give wonderful message to us that don't lose hope. In this rat is nearer to die but he try to live and he can't lose hope.

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  6. Hello sir, I am read this poem. It is a very good poem.It is a short poem but amazing poem. The way you have described the situation of the rat is many struggle. The poem say that Nating can be possible.

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  7. Hello sir, poem is very short but it give wonderful message to us that don't lose hope. In this rat is nearer to die but he try to live and he can't lose hope.

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  8. Hii sir.I'm really impressed by this poem. It gives the way of living life when everywhere are problems. Thank you ....

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  9. Hi,sir it's very amazing story.i ilke to very much this poem because rat was very struggle in his life. This poem describe whole situation in rat life.This poem hard touching, Emotional,sweet and short.

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  10. Hello sir,i read this beautiful poem and it is such a amazing poem.This poem express braveness and struggle of a life.In short we can not lose the hope in our life and we try to best in our life.So this is the lesson of the poem.

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  11. Hello sir, i read this poem and it's very amazing story. This poem express struggling of a life. this poem emotional sweet and short.so this poem lesson of our life

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